We understand composing a well-written personal statement could be the most challenging part of the med school application process. Here are a few simple tips to make your essay stand out.
1. Make it unique.
- Avoid the use of clichés
- Ex. Though I want to become a doctor because I like to help people maybe true, you can better express your uniqueness by writing about how you like to help people though anecdotes, whether it is describing a philanthropic event you attended or a community project you have worked on.
2. Don’t ignore your weaknesses, address them.
- No need to elaborate on your weaknesses but they must be addressed head on Spin your weaknesses into positives
- Ex. You received poor grades your first semester of college, and explain what you did to become a better student.
- By avoiding to address such weakness, will lead admissions team to assume, and could adversely affect your chances of earning an acceptance letter
3. Don't be afraid to change up your sentence structure. Good writing feels natural, nothing should be forced.
- By using good transitions, you will progress your argument organically.
- The best writing uses a variety of sentence length and style throughout the paragraphs.
- Ex. There are numerous ways to create a diverse sentence: using a colon, a semicolon, or a comma can do wonders to a basic paragraph. To find out how your essay flows, read it aloud.
4. Have others read it.
- Ask your friends, family, and peers to help you evaluate your work
- Questions to Ask Your Proofreader:
- Does Essay have a central theme?
- Are there any clichés?
- Is it repetitious?
- Is the Essay memorable?
5. Most importantly: revise, revise, and revise some more.
- No one creates a perfect first draft. The key to creating a great essay is to polish the writing until it shines.
- That means reading it over, making corrections, having a peer edit it, and repeat.
- Sending in a rough first draft will show. EssayEdge.com offers free help throughout your entire essay writing process and can provide step-by-step guides if you need extra support.